>>11182
It's called a Tchapka, and it fucking itches.

>>11183
But to be fair, most clothes fucking itch.

>>11184

you might be alergic!

But with all due seriozitae, Chapkas are fucking amazing.

>>11185
They look goofy, on a sidenote.

>>11186

They do a bit, but they are cozy as fuck, and comfy.

Technomancer 2012/02/21(Tue)19:17 No. 11188 ID: 13a12d
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progress?

>>11188

Holy shit, if I didn't know better, I'd say that's pretty close to Muju!

>>11198
I'm totally trying to imitate her.

It irritates me to think that I basically have the competences necessary to draw about as well as her, but that I lack the... you know, when you do things easily and elegantly, without having to purposefully think about what you're doing, and that it ends up looking better this way...

>>11200

well, I don't know what to say, Maybe you should try and take up a request every now and then?

>>11201
I have three interesting requests to spend hours on saved on my harddrive, right now I am precisely working on what would help me reach her level, and I don't have the time to do more.

>>11202

Sorry , I should have probably mentioned on requests you are usually not catering to.

>>11203
That would be boring characters, mostly. And I find drawing SoBs pretty boring.

Technomancer 2012/03/03(Sat)07:24 No. 11428 ID: 70f410
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>>11188
and it ended up giving this

I modified the face about six times, and I dunno, it still looks a bit weird but I don't know if it's just me.

>>11428

Something does look strange, but I can't fully identify it yet.

>>11429
i think it's either the whole perspective that's slightly fucked up, or the nose.

dunno

Anonymous 2012/03/03(Sat)08:23 No. 11437 ID: feab56
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>>11428
Her forehead looks very big and/or her face looks too... recessed? into her head.

>>11437
I'll work on it and see if it fixes something

Technomancer 2012/03/03(Sat)10:34 No. 11447 ID: 70f410
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okay, what now?

>>11447

To me, it seems to have the same problem as Heinrich, Skull is a bit out of proportions, eyes are too close to one another and they are too "indented" if that makes any sence.

Technomancer 2012/03/03(Sat)10:50 No. 11450 ID: 70f410
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>>11448
yes, that's also the feeling I'm getting but the problem is that when I try to place them wider apart it looks even stranger, or not really noticeable

okay, I tried to compromise: how is this?

>>11450

it's a step forward. I am having difficulties myself with the redlines I made on Heinrich , I am losing too much details I want to show off, because I have to shift his torso / arms...

>>11451
I suppose that the fact that I gave her that weird asian-ish facetype isn't helping; but I've seen weirder-looking people.

well, unless someone has avery clear idea of what should be done, I'm going to leave it that way lest I screw it up even harder.

Not sure if I'd say I was totally clear on what needed to be done, but I think the nose looks a little long as well.

Technomancer 2012/03/03(Sat)15:06 No. 11459 ID: 70f410
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>>11457
indeed

Technomancer 2012/03/06(Tue)16:10 No. 11521 ID: c03136
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okay, so, I'm trying to correct a few things here and there

which one is better?

...is that badass warmaiden wearing a DIAPER?

>>11530
You're not familiar with OP, are you?

>>11533

>warmaiden

I guess not.

>>11521
>>11521

Left one, if you correct the kneepad

>>11546
okay, which kneepad?

>>11547

The one on her right leg, and the high heeled boots need work.. Uh, Define them, they look like they are melding into the bg / floor

Other than that, everything is okay from my pov.

Technomancer 2012/03/07(Wed)20:52 No. 11553 ID: c03136
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Okay, is there still something I should improve?

Technomancer 2012/03/07(Wed)20:53 No. 11554 ID: c03136
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>>11553
knowing that the goal is to match (outmatch, if possible) this:

>>11554
Well, stop with the gorram diper and you should be that much closer to your goal
>badwrongfun.jpg

God-Emperor of Mankind 2012/03/08(Thu)03:18 No. 11559 ID: 59a9ef
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>>11554

derp

>>11559
what?

>>11560

Sorry, I was just doing one of those "What Anime does to Western style" kind of comparisons...

In regards to your question on how to get closer to Muju's style, maybe it would be a good idea to drop fetishism for medieval style armors, bulky platings instead of corsets, actual warboots instead of high heels etc ?

>>11561
oh, if it's merely a matter of design, then it's negligible, I'm only talking about the technical aspect.

Also
>closer to muju's design
>drop the fetish bits and put a more serious-looking armor
not so sure about that

>>11563
You could always start with working on how to draw the hip area so it at least looks semi-realistic.

>>11565
And undo that ass? Blasphemy.

>>11592
well, at least move the right leg further on the left to better account for the width.

>>11592
Not really "dat ass", just a mess, as it has been since I saw Technomancers work for the first time.

Muju's work has a much 'harder' edge than yours typically does, Technomancer. Almost every detail is outlined, however finely, whereas yours does not. This makes her art look more, well, I wouldn't say 'cartoony,' but it looks as though it belongs in a comic book or similar. Aside from this, your art is pretty similar, I'd say. If you want to imitate her better, I'd suggest trying to copy this fine 'outline' business.

>>11606
probably because the ass shouldn't be distinguishable from that angle, and because the other part of the hips seems absent, right?

>>11625
seems so.

Also, Jean Giraud/Moebius just died and that rustles my jimmies.

>>11627

The guy that made the Halo Graphic Novel?

awww

>>11628
I don't think so, no. Nihei did a short Halo comic, but he has nothing to do with Moebius.

No, I'm talking about the guy who is usually regarded as the greatest French comics author. While I agree that his contribution, talent, competence and influence are all outstanding, I still prefer Druillet, so, since this one isn't dead yet, my jimmies aren't too rustled.

God-Emperor of Mankind 2012/03/10(Sat)07:41 No. 11630 ID: f33e12
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>>11629

OVERLORD!!AwZwHkBGWx 2012/03/10(Sat)14:40 No. 11634 ID: aafcf7
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Fucken, Ralph McQuarrie just died as well. He was pretty damn good. His original design for Darth Vader looks much more sinister than how he actually appears in the films.

>Moebius has died
FUCK.
>>11628
>>11629
Moebius and Nihei both wrote parts of the Halo Graphic Novel.

God-Emperor of Mankind 2012/03/10(Sat)14:58 No. 11636 ID: f33e12
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>>11634